Forbidden Love Page 1

luv!! Umm... I have a couple critiques, I hope you don't mind. Okay, first would be to write your words before you put the speech bubble, or box, or whatever there. I noticed in the "A block away" box the text looked rather squished. Also, you should always, ALWAYS use a ruler to do your panels and boxes-the difference IS noticeable. Oh, and rulers work well for backgrounds, too. oh, and in the third panel, the woman's hand is backwards. And, remember to do the pencil lines lightly first, THEN go over them darkly. I see quite a few "ghost-lines" in this page. And, um.. what's panel 6 supposed to be?.. I'm sorry, I just...
Sorry if my crits sorta crushed you, you really did do lovely on this! I love the first, eighth, and fourteenth panel! Keep up the good work, I will be looking forward to the next page!!