Why won't it show me the full veiw. AHHHHRG!!!!!!! Tat pisses me off. I'm going to go off in my little emo corner. I hope you can still read it. T_T

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"The warrior does not care if he's called a dog or a beast. The main thing is winning." ~from some samurai that said it.

*le gasp* YUSH! First page of Forbidden Love! Sweet! (I've thought about doing this with my fanfic as well, lol) Can't wait for more .

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May You Always Be In My Heart...
SMK - 11.09.96 BAM - 03.17.09

"What? Tell me what to do! I've got it here."
"No I can't tell you..." - Eddie Izzard

I could read it fine.

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If you love AtemxAnzu, we're waitin' for you here! --> ~AtemxAnzu

May You Always Be In My Heart...
SMK - 11.09.96 BAM - 03.17.09

"What? Tell me what to do! I've got it here."
"No I can't tell you..." - Eddie Izzard

Thank you for reading. ^^

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"The warrior does not care if he's called a dog or a beast. The main thing is winning." ~from some samurai that said it.

Finally! You have the comic version of you're story getting done. Alright!

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I live to disrupt harmony I seek to disrupt balance. I'm not really a bad guy for where would the need for order be without me?

Why are you worried that chaos is in the air? Don't despair chaos is everywhere.

By the seiryu I will not lose!

Thanks for reading. :hugs:

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"The warrior does not care if he's called a dog or a beast. The main thing is winning." ~from some samurai that said it.

Welcome

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If you love AtemxAnzu, we're waitin' for you here! --> ~AtemxAnzu

May You Always Be In My Heart...
SMK - 11.09.96 BAM - 03.17.09

"What? Tell me what to do! I've got it here."
"No I can't tell you..." - Eddie Izzard

luv!! Umm... I have a couple critiques, I hope you don't mind. Okay, first would be to write your words before you put the speech bubble, or box, or whatever there. I noticed in the "A block away" box the text looked rather squished. Also, you should always, ALWAYS use a ruler to do your panels and boxes-the difference IS noticeable. Oh, and rulers work well for backgrounds, too. oh, and in the third panel, the woman's hand is backwards. And, remember to do the pencil lines lightly first, THEN go over them darkly. I see quite a few "ghost-lines" in this page. And, um.. what's panel 6 supposed to be?.. I'm sorry, I just...
Sorry if my crits sorta crushed you, you really did do lovely on this! I love the first, eighth, and fourteenth panel! Keep up the good work, I will be looking forward to the next page!!

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No It's fine really. I need some critisism Or I'll never get better. No you are fine. ^^ Thank you. ^^ :hugs: (Though I made other pages and stoped for a bit to work on them. I'll keep this advice in mind for future referances.)

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"The warrior does not care if he's called a dog or a beast. The main thing is winning." ~from some samurai that said it.